GirlsRoxClub

Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  http://www.girlsroxclub.webs.com/

Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  Google Chrome

Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . C-

Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  F-

Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap

 

 

DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. We suck at grammar.

 

All reviews are final and only hold until the site has made changes. Any changes in the site automatically cancel the grade value.

!*UPDATE*! - All review that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided. 

 

OVERALL:

You’re site is very bright and colorful, excluding the holiday theme. Girly and that is your point so that good. I think you need to explain a little bit more about your site. Like what’s your age group? When I think girl I think 3-12. So you need to be clearer on that. You seem to have more contest things for girls. I would say add videos more and maybe a page just for music. Things girls would appeal too. I see potential for this site though so keep it up.

Content: **** (4)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Functionality: **** (4)

 

 

Home:

 

 

Overall: Very bright, colorful. . .I think I shouldn’t review your site. I’m really not into the whole girly thing or in a very Christmas-y mood. Uhg oh well this is my job. Your font looks pretty much the same, besides the color. Your header fonts should be bigger then your normal font. And I’m not saying make them bigger, I’m saying make your normal font smaller. A good 12-14 font works.

 

You have a little update about your layout, and I think you should’ve waited until your site was back to normal, ‘cause I was going to suggest you can ad holiday flavor to your site and not just completely change the layout.

 

Subscribe, center it?

 

Counters! Put them in you footer, believe me you would like that.

 

Join the club, add a link.

 

Site info should be on the bottom or in the footer, and legally you can’t say maker, even though Freewebs didn’t make it either, still.  You can say founder.

 

Contact, your form doesn’t work. You can easily find form submission sites for free and add that to your site or create a contact us page and place it in your footer.

 

Content *** (3)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Fun videos

 

Overall: Content seems girly which is a good thing in your case. I think you should add more videos that girls would appeal to. Oh yeah FRED! I heart fred, he’s awesome. Ap (me) is a huge youtuber so you jot good points there.

 

Content: **** (3)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

 

Fun stuff

 

 

Overall: Um, riddles are cool. Vids are nice game is annoying and the music is instant start. The comments randomly in the middle of the page are not . . . nice.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: **** (4)

 

More fun stuff

 

 

OVERALL: Are you Mexican? The illusions are cool, personally I have two of my own that I bought from Mexico. The old couple with younger couple as their faces is a family favorite, my grandma has one in her house n Mexico. The comments were still annoying. A little explaining on the picture would be nice. And you should always site pictures. [Updates] about the Mexican thing, never met a Mexican who celebrates Hanukah, so yeah you’re probably not.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Members page

 

Overall: Confusing.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: * (1)

Layout: **** (4)

 

 

Girlsrox members

 

Overall: A lot of flash and animated butterflies. A lot of flash slows down you page, a lot. And you don’t have to get everything from widgetbox, they have those annoying get widgets below them.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Picture archive

 

Overall: Doesn’t freewebs offer  a gallery for this.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Contest and winners

 

Overall:  Bright colors! Um I really don’t know what to say about this page.

 

Content: ** (2)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Holiday party page

 

Overall:  Cool, I like that you made a page just for Christmas it’s better then changing you whole layout nut oh well your site. You have a lot of contest, I like how you ask people what there whishes are.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Functionality: **** (4)

Anime 0 Unlimited

Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . http://missconductband.webs.com/

Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Google Chrome

Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . A-

Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . C-

Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap

DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. We suck at grammar.

!*UPDATE*! - All reviews that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided. 

OVERALL:

Your site is wonderful, even though I detest the color red. Anime is a very popular topic, which I admit I watch. The one and ONLY review was good. I didn’t see any other reviews and I think people would love to see more, I would call those the money makers. You seem to update thing at a regular pace, and seem to notify people, which is good. You update people a lot with Anime news and that’s always interesting. You have contests, which brings members tighter, though I didn’t see a prize. L Um. . .not my choice of layouts but it suits your content well, which you have a lot of! (In a good way) The only thing I see with your site is to improve it. Get more partners or Ad-Exchange, upload a Favicon, and maybe make an intro page, just suggestions.

Content: **** (4)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Functionality: **** (5)

Home:

Overall: Welcome notice is cool, tells visitors up front what your site is, your content a link to a page that supports your site. Though the font is a little too small, I can hardly read it even with my glasses on, I suggest bringing the font up just a little. E-Mail to a friend and subscribe are very nice thing to have but I don’t know up on top is very appealing to the eyes.

Urgent notice doesn’t really seem urgent. Not necessary.

Updates, LUB this, so many sites have decent content but no one knows ‘cause they don’t tell people. Great job.

Content **** (4)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Weekly Poll

Overall: I don’t see the need for a poll to have it’s own page. You can move this poll on the homepage. You can put it side by side next to the intro paragraph, you can do this in he site designer.

Content: * (1)

Organization: (0)

Layout: **** (4)

Affiliates

Overall: Like this page and of course Ad-Exchange which our site also offers. I like that you describe the site and provide possible banners/pictures and Otaku is there, we reviewed that site already. Kakashi’s Lair link is broken.

Content: *** (3)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Advertise Us

OVERALL: The banner are nice and small, different colors to choose from and the codes are just below, very nice. You have a toolbar nice feature.

Content: *** (3)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

F.A.Q.

Overall: I think every site needs one of these, I like your explanations you could actually understand them, not like ours L

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Forums

Overall: You supply a lot of topic and seem to actually use your forums, which is always nice.

Content: *** (3)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

Reviews

Overall: Reviews! Who doesn’t like reviews? A lot of people don’t but that’s beside the point. As, hopefully, you know our site also does reviews and would more then happy if you could do half reviews for our site, but that’s if you want.

Content: * (1)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: **** (4)

Contests

Overall: Great way to get your community together, check your submission. We hear at findthecrew also like to participate with the sites we review, try to see it more from a member/visitor/review POV so I decided to submit a banner/Ad thing. . .

Content: ** (2)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

Anime News

Overall: You seem to really know your info, wow. O-o

Content: **** (4)

Organization: ***** (5)

Layout: **** (4)

Anime Openings

Overall: Whoa, that’s a lot of openings. That’s good I like that you update and have a lot of content. And I just found out I can see my vidz on you site. Only when I’m logged in I think and I think I could only see it but still cool.

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: **** (4)

The Art Gallery

Overall: Nice art makes me want to submit my own.

Content: *** (3)

Organization: ***** (5)

Layout: **** (4)

Manga Previews

Overall: Very clean, very organized. Didn’t check if the links though and I like the little descriptions.

Content: **** (4)

Organization: ***** (5)

Layout: **** (4)

iMac Fans

Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  http://www.freewebs.com/imacfans

Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  Google Chrome

Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . B-

Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  C-

Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap

 

 

DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. We suck at grammar.

!*UPDATE*! - All reviews that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided. 

 

OVERALL:

You seem to really care about the iMac and it’s a nice little site. There’s very little to say bad about maybe only some improvements. Reviews are an unfortunate disappointment. I like the dark theme, though earlier I saw a white/grey theme I liked the other better, it fit well with the whole iMac thing. Your website seemed like an informative website, only there for information yet there was hardly information. Anyone could easily look this up at apple.com. You need information that would make people want to look and search your site, like good reviews. Your information didn’t five me the need to look into the Mac further, it was just there. Although you offer help on your site there was no explanation. What do you help with? Programs, application, hardware? No one knows so no one will ask. Oh I like the banner! Nice shot of the iMac.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Functionality: **** (4)

 

Intro/Welcome Page

 

 

Overall:

 

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: *** (3)

 

Home:

 

 

Overall: Nice scroll text, centered would be nice. The news updates are nice, lets people know that you update your site. The whole "We all use Logic" - The Killers thing is confusing. Did you say that or did a magazine/website say that. If anything is on quotation, site it. Blog link did not work. Choices of the weeks cool, nice little thing to have. Counters are annoying, are you keeping track of people visiting your site or are you showing off? Bottom links should go towards the. . .bottom, maybe before the copyright notice. You can do that by going to the site designer and clicking on header/footer. Click on the footer part and just type the html codes for the links you want. Blog link also does not work there.

Content *** (3)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Blog

 

Overall: Um. . .nice? I keep saying that word a lot. I’m not known for being nice damn it! Okay so I’m guessing you really like the Mac, it shows. Not a bad thing, but not always a good. You seem to updates regularly, which is awesome!

 

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

 

Photos

 

 

Overall: Pictures are nice, shows the product, don’t see the need for it though, you seem to post the picture everywhere else.

 

iMac

 

 

OVERALL: More pictures . . . maybe consider doing a transparent background picture. You can easily do this with lunapic.com. You seem to REALLY like the iMac; maybe giving more information about it would be nice. It just seems, right now, that you’re advertising the iMac. People need that dirt, the grease to fully understand the product.

 

Content: *** (3)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Apple

 

Overall: More information, which is good. I don’t think you really need help in this page.

 

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

 

Reviews

 

Overall: Confusing, I didn’t know they were links. One was empty and the other wasn’t really “reviews” more like an overview and ads.

 

Content: *** (3)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Genius

 

Overall: Don’t really know what this page is. I think it’s a contact page, not sure. You should let people know what it is . . . Does that make sense. It didn’t to me. Oh well.

 

Content: ** (2)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Contact

 

Overall: We would love to advertise your site if you do the same for us! 

Rossettiman

Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . http://www.freewebs.com/rossettiman/

Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  Google Chrome

Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . C-

Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  Um. . .F

Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .No one

Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap

 

 

DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. We suck at grammar.

!*UPDATE*! - All reviews that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided. 

 

 

 

 

OVERALL:

You’re idea of the site is nice. Shows off your talents and helps people in general, if they ever don’t have a breathing apparatus near water that is. Your sites a little to bold and you center just about every paragraph. Wallpapers are a nuisance and annoyance pick one and stick to it. You show people on how to make your projects and that always great then just reading on what to do. Overall this isn’t the best site in the world but it’s still pretty good for what you have. Don’t worry about your grade our highest so far is a B+ and we think we went easy on them.

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: *** (3)

Functionality: **** (4)

 

Intro/Welcome Page

Overall:

Music, music is always good. I don’t know if you need the music but it’s always nice to hear some I guess. I’m not sure if its supposed to start automatically but if it does not I think you should find a music player that can start automatically. Freewebs offers there own and there are sites like MixPod.com that offer these as well.

 

Disclaimers are always good to have.

Large White/Red font. People tend to skip over large font normal size fonts are fine just capitalize important words like death

Example:

“Warning: construction and/or use of any breathing device (C.A.R., Advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version),P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. professional) on this site is not advised. Misuse can lead to serious injury and/or DEATH. Both founders of Chris Inc. are SCBA and SCUBA certified and understand the risks involved creating and testing these devices. Do not duplicate any of these devices involving C.A.R, advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version), P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. Professional. The Chris Inc. Team is not responsible for any incident caused as a result of duplication and/or testing of the these devices (C.A.R, advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version), P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. Professional.)”

 

Don’t have your words centered, to the far left is just fine and easier to read. And bring down the font size. Your main warning should be at the bottom of the page, having it at the top might scare off people, I know I was.

 

You chose a transparent back grounded layout. Which means where you content is you can see the background, now that’s nice and all if you have a ‘pretty’ background but what’s the point in your case, if you want to keep your layout you need to pick a friendly background a friendly font that matches it. Although the water theme is appropriate with your content I suggest picking a template where the links are located vertically, for your long list of pages.

 

Content: *** (3)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: *** (3)

 

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C.A.R./Adv. C.A.R./C.A.R. 2/C.A.R. Professional/P.A.R. Prototype

 

Overall:

Okay well big font again, just normal font is fine and unbold if it’s bold. Don’t center! Oh! And what’s up with the backgrounds? A different one per page? Could get a little confusing, I think you should stick to one.

Pictures are a great way to understand something and I give Kudos for that! Though! You should really consider branding your pictures with a logo or your site’s URL. It’s harder for someone to claim the picture as there’s. I like how you numbered the steps as well, good organization.

 

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: *** (3)

 

GSD Chronicles

 

Overall: I don’t get it and I’m pretty sure other people wont either. You should explain what the links are so people won’t be afraid of getting redirected to a porn site. If you don’t want to explain then you can just link the site on your Navbar, no need to waste a page.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: * (1)

Layout: * (1)

 

 

World War CCG

 

Overall: I think this page you don’t need to have your words to the left centered looks fine here and the font matches the content. Though I think you should lower down the font size and the background picture seems to match the page nicely. As for patent or Copyrights, Freewebs temporally have rights to all content and pictures I believe, so you shouldn’t worry about that.

Or you should create a contract that people have to agree to In order for them to see that page. Very nice idea of the cards, just a added personal note.

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: *** (3)

 

Founders

 

Overall:

Don’t use comic font! You already know about the font size and bolding, I hope. Lol (ß See we can be fun)

Bios are always good let’s people know that you care enough about what you do. Um pictures, pictures are nice to show who you are but having a more professional picture is . . . nicer. And you can put the content side by side. When you are on the editor page just click on the content box where your content is and there should be a column section. Click on 2 columns and then post the other bio on that side, that way your bios would be side by side.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: *** (3)

 

Feedback

 

Overall: It’s always nice to hear feedback.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

Otakudesuka

  Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  http://otakudesuka.tk/

Find The Crew member: . . . . . . . . . . . . . No

Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Google Chrome

Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .B+

Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . D

Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Penguin

Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap

DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. 

Warnings: We suck at grammar and there are a lot of reapeat words.

!*UPDATE*! - All reviews that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided. 

OVERALL:

You seem to update things regularly; a lot of people visit your site. You have decent content and like to hear feedback. You have all the right things but in the wrong places. You have the idea of what you want in a site and you can clearly see it in your pages. The site maybe a little confusing at first but when you get used to the contrast of colors you get the idea of it. When you first enter the site you see banner(s) which indicates what kind of site it is and what content you offer. The organization is pretty off and could use some work on that area. It’s one of the better website that I’ve seen on Freewebs but, in the ‘real, not real world’ it’s not a very functional site.

Content: ***** (5)

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: *** (3)

Functionality: *** (3)

 

Intro/Welcome Page

 

Pros:

·                     I like the Final Fantasy and Kakashi banner.

·                     I like that you have links in your tagline section, I think you should add more links such as F.A.Q, Support, Contact Us, Forums, Sponsor, Partners, stuff like that, maybe it would clean up your homepage a lot more.

·                     I like your online guest widget though I think it should go towards the farthest part on the page.

·                     I like the music on the homepage. You show your latest content on it, that’s a nice feature to have though the new stuff you add should be at the top.

 

Cons:

·                     The second banner you have is very slow and slows down your webpage considerately although I like the affects the logo gets in the way.

·                     "http://otakudesuka.webs.com, http://otakudesuka.tk??" These links are very confusing they take you to the same place; I think you should stick to one.

·                     The disclaimer shout have a page in its own, you could site it at the bottom of the page where your sign in and sign up links are located, which I like.

·                     The ads are very annoying and get in the way but I understand that some people use ads for their domain name hosting.

·                     Announcements should be in a blog.

·                     Links could go onto the new links application that freewebs offer.

·                     A separate donating page should be created.

 

Overall:

The Homepage is very confusing and un-organized. There are a lot of graphics and it's always nice to have graphics but too much is bad and you have to have them in the right places. Video posting is nice, really liked that, lets people know that you update your site and you get content in. Links on the sidebar are small and hard to read.

 

Content: ***** (5) [I'm not sure if this is good.]

Organization: ** (2)

Layout: *** (3)

 

Anime Episodes:

 

Pros:

·                     I like that you have lots of Anime to choose from, especially Naruto Shippuuden.

 

Cons:

·                     Again with the flash! Lol

·                     LONG list I think people should just see the video home page and they can pick what play list they want to watch. You get rid of pages you don't need this way.

 

 

Overall:

Less confusing but you click one link which takes you to another link which takes you to an ad page and yeah you get my drift.

 

Content: ***** (5) [In a good way.]

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Movies/OVA's

 

Pros/Cons/Overall: I don't know I guess it's decent this way.

 

Content: ***** (5) [Good.]

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: *** (3)

 

 

Download Gallery

 

Pros: This page is easy to get around, you know what your doing and it’s just simple but nice.

 

Cons: Nothing really bad to say just maybe a quick disclaimer. DWNLD at your own risk kind’ve thing.

 

Overall: I really digging this page, maybe because the other pages I visited have been confusing and hard to get around. White font is a little harsh on the eyes after awhile, especially with the black background.

 

Otaku Share

 

Pros: I think this idea is great, you involve your members and make a community by allowing members to feel like they can be a part of the site.

 

Cons: Maybe add more options for people to share

 

OVERALL: Great idea, Find The Crew recommends Wiki app to any or all freewebers.

 

Content: ** (2)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Otaku Forums!

 

Pros: It brings people together. Forums are always nice.

 

Cons: Not every site needs forums. If you always had Forums and your site is longer than 1 year and a very popular site with no post, delete the forums, you don’t need them.

 

Overall: Not necessary if your site is popular and you have no post.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Otaku List

 

Pros: Clever, but sneaky.

 

Cons: You need to be a member to see the members??

 

Overall: I think you should limit pages like, the downloads’ page, you must be a member to download the anime and movies, or maybe even watch movies. It gets you more members and more interaction.

 

Content: * (1)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: **** (4)

 

Stats And Affiliates

 

Pros: Let’s people know who visits and how many people visit. Also nice to show off your site and makes people want to affiliate with you.

 

Cons: “Cluttery.”

 

Overall: Nice, let’s people know how your site is doing, but very jammed packed.

 

Content: *** (3)

Organization: *** (3)

Layout: *** (3)

 

Guestbook

 

Pros: You have a lot of signatures people seem to like your site a lot.

 

Cons: There’s a lot of spam.

 

Overall: Nice thing to have where guest can have a say and leave a nice little comment.

 

Content: **** (4)

Organization: **** (4)

Layout: *** (3)

 

I know what your thinking, Why was this review so harsh yet I got a good grade? Well we review by normal standard websites, but we understand Freewebs is a little different. And maybe compared to other websites yours not make it on the top 10 but on Freewebs your site can be on Top 10 so that’s what makes it fun! . . . and confusing.