Website: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . http://www.freewebs.com/rossettiman/
Web Browser: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Google Chrome
Freewebs Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . C-
Website Grade: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Um. . .F
Edited By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .No one
Site Reviewed By: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Ap
DISCLAIMER: Some members have knowledge in HTML/CSS/Flash/SCRIPT/Website design but we are not a professional review team. We suck at grammar.
!*UPDATE*! - All reviews that are past four weeks are declared void. This Review and Grade is officaily voided.
OVERALL:
You’re idea of the site is nice. Shows off your talents and helps people in general, if they ever don’t have a breathing apparatus near water that is. Your sites a little to bold and you center just about every paragraph. Wallpapers are a nuisance and annoyance pick one and stick to it. You show people on how to make your projects and that always great then just reading on what to do. Overall this isn’t the best site in the world but it’s still pretty good for what you have. Don’t worry about your grade our highest so far is a B+ and we think we went easy on them.
Content: ***** (5)
Organization: *** (3)
Layout: *** (3)
Functionality: **** (4)
Intro/Welcome Page
Overall:
Music, music is always good. I don’t know if you need the music but it’s always nice to hear some I guess. I’m not sure if its supposed to start automatically but if it does not I think you should find a music player that can start automatically. Freewebs offers there own and there are sites like MixPod.com that offer these as well.
Disclaimers are always good to have.
Large White/Red font. People tend to skip over large font normal size fonts are fine just capitalize important words like death
Example:
“Warning: construction and/or use of any breathing device (C.A.R., Advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version),P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. professional) on this site is not advised. Misuse can lead to serious injury and/or DEATH. Both founders of Chris Inc. are SCBA and SCUBA certified and understand the risks involved creating and testing these devices. Do not duplicate any of these devices involving C.A.R, advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version), P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. Professional. The Chris Inc. Team is not responsible for any incident caused as a result of duplication and/or testing of the these devices (C.A.R, advanced C.A.R., C.A.R. 2(either version), P.A.R. Prototype, and/or C.A.R. Professional.)”
Don’t have your words centered, to the far left is just fine and easier to read. And bring down the font size. Your main warning should be at the bottom of the page, having it at the top might scare off people, I know I was.
You chose a transparent back grounded layout. Which means where you content is you can see the background, now that’s nice and all if you have a ‘pretty’ background but what’s the point in your case, if you want to keep your layout you need to pick a friendly background a friendly font that matches it. Although the water theme is appropriate with your content I suggest picking a template where the links are located vertically, for your long list of pages.
Content: *** (3)
Organization: ** (2)
Layout: *** (3)
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C.A.R./Adv. C.A.R./C.A.R. 2/C.A.R. Professional/P.A.R. Prototype
Overall:
Okay well big font again, just normal font is fine and unbold if it’s bold. Don’t center! Oh! And what’s up with the backgrounds? A different one per page? Could get a little confusing, I think you should stick to one.
Pictures are a great way to understand something and I give Kudos for that! Though! You should really consider branding your pictures with a logo or your site’s URL. It’s harder for someone to claim the picture as there’s. I like how you numbered the steps as well, good organization.
Content: ***** (5)
Organization: **** (4)
Layout: *** (3)
GSD Chronicles
Overall: I don’t get it and I’m pretty sure other people wont either. You should explain what the links are so people won’t be afraid of getting redirected to a porn site. If you don’t want to explain then you can just link the site on your Navbar, no need to waste a page.
Content: * (1)
Organization: * (1)
Layout: * (1)
World War CCG
Overall: I think this page you don’t need to have your words to the left centered looks fine here and the font matches the content. Though I think you should lower down the font size and the background picture seems to match the page nicely. As for patent or Copyrights, Freewebs temporally have rights to all content and pictures I believe, so you shouldn’t worry about that.
Or you should create a contract that people have to agree to In order for them to see that page. Very nice idea of the cards, just a added personal note.
Content: ***** (5)
Organization: **** (4)
Layout: *** (3)
Founders
Overall:
Don’t use comic font! You already know about the font size and bolding, I hope. Lol (ß See we can be fun)
Bios are always good let’s people know that you care enough about what you do. Um pictures, pictures are nice to show who you are but having a more professional picture is . . . nicer. And you can put the content side by side. When you are on the editor page just click on the content box where your content is and there should be a column section. Click on 2 columns and then post the other bio on that side, that way your bios would be side by side.
Content: **** (4)
Organization: *** (3)
Layout: *** (3)
Overall: It’s always nice to hear feedback.
Content: * (1)
Organization: **** (4)
Layout: **** (4)
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